June 05, 2004
I am fishing for comments curious about this. Does my writing make you grit your teeth?
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I was actually paid to be an editor at one time in my life (which you'd never know by my sloppy writing), and there's a lot more to communication than comma placement. You are very clear, you have a conversational and relaxed style, and I feel like I know you.
Posted by: nic at June 05, 2004 03:29 PM (16A49)
If someone can tell what I meant, and it was typed in a relatively English-like format, then I generally hope that they'll let it go without comment.
As I always say, "You must have known what I meant, otherwise you couldn't have corrected the punctuation".
Posted by: Patton at June 05, 2004 05:24 PM (cLlFA)
And I think your writing style is superb!
Posted by: Tuning Spork at June 05, 2004 05:42 PM (0Vz8o)

I'm serious about the feedback, good and bad, so don't let me commenting kill this thread. Anyone?
Posted by: Ted at June 06, 2004 08:31 AM (ZjSa7)
Posted by: Tim at June 06, 2004 09:54 AM (CDV4y)
But watch out for the attitude, bub. I don't see it yet, but it's easy for it to slip over into "f* you, gomer, I'm in charge around here, and if I make what looks like a mistake it's because I'm *important* enough to define what's correct."
Spelling, punctuation, and syntax are redundancy, extra bits in the datastream that help to disambiguate errors. One can argue about this or that detail, and a lot of them are just finicking, but overall they're useful if not absolutely necessary, just like the checksum on an IP packet. Saying that you can ignore them with impunity is taking the bean-counter approach: those bits are expensive, don't use so many of them. Which is fine until the channel gets noisy, or some more subtle concept needs to be transmitted, whereupon said bean-counter is terribly disappointed that mistakes get made and nothing is done about it.
Yeah, a relaxed attitude is OK, but think of it this way: the Arabs don't normally put all the vowels in their words, because they're "extra" marks above or below the script and they get lazy. The difference between "virgin" and "raisin" in Arabic is one vowel...
Regards,
Ric
Posted by: Ric Locke at June 06, 2004 08:30 PM (s6nvi)
*ahem* from my point of view a blog is your way of putting information across. I know personally i write as though i were speaking and therefore it comes across very chatty. I believe you may also do the same, but ina slightly more structured way. Bear with me, i'm getting to the point! Written speech and spoken speech follow very different sets of rules. What is ok in speech looks "wrong" in writing and similarly if you were to talk with "perfect" grammar you'd sound like a weirdo!
So, this brings me to my point. Your writing is a reflection of your speech, therefore your grammar and punctation reflects that you use in everyday life. It's not as if you have to submit this to an English teacher. If you did they would go through it with a red pen saying "too chatty", "what does this mean?" & "why have you done this?" and they would then re-edit it until it is no longer a piece of work that contains a bit of you.
We understand everything because you right for us. Don't worry about your use of punctuation. If however youa re that concerned I have a very boring book on syntax and another one on morphology you could borrow.
Ah the wonders of English linguistics... how i love my degree!
AxXx
Posted by: Lemurgirl at June 07, 2004 04:50 AM (YcruH)
Posted by: Blogeline at June 07, 2004 01:19 PM (O27QY)
I do a lot of business writing and follow rules to the letter, but on my blog--pshaw!
If you've never tried it, type a few lines from a great novel into MS Word and watch it destroy the beauty and pace. Especially writers like Hemingway who knew how to craft a sentence.
Besides, creative punctuation is used on many blogs to illustrate timing.
All that aside, great job.
Posted by: Paul at June 07, 2004 04:03 PM (qdpUa)
Not.
Seriously, your writing style is great, and you make fewer spelling and punctuation errors than most bloggers. My job is all about words, so I am usually a pretty tough critic (although I usually reserve my harshest criticism for fellow lawyers). No complaints here.
Posted by: John Lanius at June 07, 2004 04:21 PM (YVul2)
Posted by: Ted at June 08, 2004 11:09 AM (blNMI)
ha!
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